Saturday, November 22, 2014

Followup to Review of Vengeance is Mine...Give Us Some Feedback! Just for Fun... Writers Do Your Storyboard?

When I create the characters, I always envision what they might actually look like to make them seem more real. I have included some of my storyboard depictions below so you can see my ideas, but I love the images you chose as well. You nailed the dark braid on the victims. And Castle would absolutely make a wonderful Tucker!
Thank you again very much for such a comprehensive and thoroughly entertaining review. It's one of the best reviews I have received and I'm very proud to have it.
Most Gratefully,
Harry

Here's some feedback I got from Harry Krebs.
I had added some of my thoughts via picture and Harry came back with his own! Cool... Now, he was quite accepting of my selections, but we thought it would be fun to share how they rank up against his own storyboard...


Now Here's the Techie Part... Pull up my review in one window
and this in the other... See the book excerpt for further info...

Harry's                                                                           Mine!




















I don't know much about cars, but I think mine looks more like a sleek jag...LOL...

 

Personally, I love Brosnan, but then, Castle is a writer like the main character...



Notice that
both look 
somewhat alike

but I thought the pose of Kate, Castle's wife, showed the personality of the wife...?





I chose the
one with
clothes because that was mentioned many times in the book...

Harry said I nailed the braid on the victims, but, then, I didn't include the following other characters...do you know who they are? The maid was one of my favorite characters, so I'm happy to get the writer's image of her! So, readers, do you know the book well enough to match the remaining three???? Add your thoughts as comments!


 


Writers, do you storyboard your characters? Share some or your thoughts with us!
Of course, they are just our personal opinions, of course...LOL

GABixlerReviews

Talanov News - Cover Reveal - Movie! Check out A Favorite Book Character!

Dear friends and family,

As many of you know, I've been working the past year -- that's right, I said year -- on the screen adaptation of my upcoming Talanov thriller, DRAGON HEAD. And I am proud to present the official book cover to you here and now. The same artist who designed the gold-medal-award-winning cover for November Echo also designed this one. Her name is Frauke Spanuth and her work is absolute genius.
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Needless to say, I am very proud of the Dragon Head cover. I think it rocks. Naturally, this means I have to produce a story that matches expectations generated by Frauke's  cover, so the pressure is definitely on! It's all good, however, because pressure like this makes me dig deep and work hard.  If I'm asking you to invest a few bucks and your time in one of my books, it is my responsibility to provide you with a story that honors that investment. For me, such a task is a privilege. Thank you for allowing me that privilege.

As far as the film is concerned, like I said earlier, the screenplay is completed after a very long year of editing (and editing and editing!). We also have a line producer's budget, which currently sits at twelve million dollars. We have money budgeted for a major star to play the part of Talanov. We have money budgeted to attract major supporting actors, as well as provide the film with some cool visual effects. But VFX is not what this film is about. Action thrillers often rely on the "shock and awe" of special effects to masquerade a weak story. I have worked hard to make this a dynamite story that will be enhanced by a few visual effects. You, of course, will be the final judge as to whether or not we succeeded (assuming everything goes according to plan and this film gets made the way we want it to be made).

So, what is the story about? In short: Talanov finds himself caught between a ruthless triad leader -- Dragon Head -- and a kill squad sent by the CIA when he tries to save the lives of three trafficked orphans. The story has already been described as "Bond-meets-Bourne-meets-Taken" in a visual sweep from the grim shantytowns of South Africa to the corridors of power in Washington to the neon chaos of Hong Kong. At its heart is a Bible verse -- Hebrews 13:5 -- I will never desert you. And Talanov discovers just how costly a promise it is when he makes such a promise to these kids.

We've set up a Dragon Head Facebook page, which I hope you will visit and "Like." Here is the link: https://www.facebook.com/dragonheadthemovie.

Plus, if you're on Facebook, please share the Dragon Head page on your own FB page.

As for my ambitions for this film, I've already partnered with some relief groups digging wells and building schools and houses around the world. I want this to be more than just a film. I can't speak for others involved in the production, but I will be directing some of my money toward helping provide some of life's basic necessities with those in need. So the more you can help by spreading the word, the better chance I have of making a difference with needed essentials like clean water, housing, schools, teachers, food, clothing, and medical supplies -- activities that helped create Talanov in the first place.

For those of you who know my story, Talanov the fictional hero was an outcome of an heroic act by an actual KGB agent who once leaked word out of Moscow that I was on a KGB watchlist for my smuggling activities behind the old Iron Curtain. What he did for me -- someone he had never met -- inspired the idea of a good-guy KGB agent who became a deep-cover spy for America during the Cold War ... a man whose past will not leave him alone now, when he's trying to atone for his old life in the KGB. So I hope you'll lend your support by visiting the Dragon Head page. To show my appreciation, down the road there will be free copies of books as well as movie tickets.

I also want to acknowledge the "5x Team" -- a group of totally awesome Christian family who faithfully pray for me, as well as support me with emails of encouragement. THANK YOU for helping me get to this point. (If anyone else wishes to join the group -- it's simply a prayer team helping underpin me with the wisdom and stamina needed to get this job done -- just let me know and I will add you to the list.)

Well, my friends, that is it for now. I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving. I'll be back in touch again soon with more Talanov news.

Blessings to you all,

Jim


 

Thursday, November 6, 2014

Purged By M, E. May Just Out-- Don't Confuse With "Purge" Movies...

In the center of the room was a short table. On it rested a
small cauldron, much like the one they found in Sasha
Winston's duffle. Next to the cauldron sat a bell, a small
stick with a crystal attached to the end of it, a small broom,
and an athame.
"Stand next to me, child," said Victoria, taking Chennelle's
hand and guiding her. "First Barbara will take the athame
and will walk around us creating the circle of power. We
must all stay iinside of the circle or the energy will be
broken."
Chennelle say Barbara pick up the dagger and walk around
everyone holding it out as though slicing through the air to
make a circle. Then she muttered something Chennelle
couldn't quite hear in four places around the circle before
replacing the athame on the table...
Victoria spoke again in a whisper. "That is our altar. She
will light the black candle to banish evil and to bring us
protection and then the red to bring us strength in the
coming days. That one is especially for you and Erica to
help you trap this killer..."
They followed Victoria to a doorway. She opened it and gestured for them to descend the dimly lit stars. Chennelle's  unease from the meeting they'd had with Amber earlier had returned.
"Detective Kendall, Detective Barnes, welcome to both of you, said Barbara in grandiose style. She was wearing an emerald green robe which set off her dark auburn hair. "We first wanted to ask the Goddess for assistance to keep us safe and to aid you in capturing this villain."
Chennelle thought villain was a rather soft term for someone who so brutally tortured and killed these womken...
"As you may have guessed, our coven consists of thirteen, but now that we've lost two members, we were hoping the two of you would stand in for them."
Chennelle's mouth dropped open. She looked toward Barnes and found hers to be open as well. This was not what they'd expected to be doing tonight.
"But we aren't Wiccans," said Chennelle. "Isn't that kind of against the rules or something?"
Some of the women giggled. Barbara put on a broad smile. "Hardly, Detective. May I call you by your first names?"
"Sure, I'm Chennelle and this is Erica."
"That makes it a little more intimate," said Barbara. "We welcome all who are willing, but if you are comfortable with it we'll understand. However, it does make the circle stronger if we have thirteen...


~~~


Purged: Circle City
  Mystery Series
By M. E. May


I moved this review onto my adult blog once I got into it. Exposing children to as much violence as they are today bothers me...just as this book bothered me. In fact at page 150 I almost stopped reading. I decided to continue, however, and was happy I did. I had briefly heard the word "purge" on television regarding a movie and was concerned if there was a connection... The two movies out there are unforgivably horrendous.  In fact, doing an internet search for this book brought up nothing but info about those movies... Undoubtedly this book might well be lost in the maze of similar titles!
Soon it will be seven days, he thought, brightening
his mood. After seven days, Doug could bring
justice upon another sinner. Grandmother had
often said the avenging angels needed to come
 and purge the world of the sinful. Sinners were
becoming more abundant.
Ag age forty-seven, he heard the voice of god
tell him this was his calling. This was why god
had given him to this woman to train him up in
the word and why he must suffer at her hands.
He would continue to cleanse and purge as long
as his Master needed him. This was his destiny.
!!!
This story, also, is horrendous, but the second half lightens the burden on readers as some visions of light begin coming through until, by the somewhat surprising ending, there was reason to commend the author for merging such divergent points of view into what most people would call a horror movie...

It was 1973 when I saw the first "supernatural horror" movie, The Exorcist. That was my first and last experience of watching this type of religious horror movie... But that has not stopped many, many more from being created. It seems the world has a need to select the "du jour religion" to use, then some other religious group turns against them and begins to explain violence on other people because they do not believe what the first group believes.

Her heart beat harder at his pledge
to save her soul, no matter the cost.
"Why would your god want to bring
justice down on me, or to save my
soul? I've done nothing to harm
anyone."
"Because you are wicked. You and
the other witches worship the devil.
You must repent or be punished."
Her head throbbed again and her
breathing became shallow with fear.
Now Sasha understood. This
religious fanatic had no understanding
of her religion. Worse than that, this
man used religion to give him an excuse
to harm others. She knew enough about
Christianity to realize he didn't even
understand his own religion.
"I not a witch, and I don't even believe
in the devil."
"Do not lie to me! I saw you dancing
around the fires of Hell tonight,
changing and thanking some goddess."
...confess, witch, or you'll be put to
death with your own evil instrument."
~~~
In this case, a Christian church has spoken out against a group of women who are Wiccans--calling them witches...  Sound familiar? Church leaders have attempted in various ways to prevent the Wiccans from conducting religious activities, refusing to differentiate between Wiccans and witches...

The first murder occurred after a young man had seen the Wiccan ceremony held by a local group. He had waited until everybody had left but the one who had led the activities and was cleaning up after. He had attacked her and taken her to another location where he had tortured her, with her own athame [knife], forcing her to admit her sins and turning to the one true god, which was his...of course... He then burned "forgiven" or "unforgiven" on their chest! But killed them anyway...

Chennelle Kendall was assigned to the case and she immediately asked for Erica Barnes to help--quite a dynamic duo for a tough case that was quickly going nowhere... Except more of the Wicca members were murdered...

Readers will know the individual who considers himself an avenging angel for god. This is somewhat of a traditional tale of abuse by a parent, or, this time, a grandmother. Using religion to justify punishment of a child, who has no guilt except having been born, has also become an ordinary story line that has certainly run its course in my opinion...

The second half of the book brings in a new character that totally transforms the direction of the case and, without saying more, the beliefs of some of the people in that town. The ending is more than satisfactory given the first half, while I continued to feel the serial killer by virtue of parental abuse has been played over and over, even if you can't really say that the killing becomes boring--rather that readers generally come to know what to expect and gains little sympathy for the, supposedly, true victim which is the child who was terribly abused by his grandmother. 

A sub-plot regarding a female cop and her family is a good tie-in for readers that deals with a domestic abuse situation. This fits in well in a cop procedural where the female gained support from other officers to fight back against an alcoholic husband and father. But also spotlights the access of guns by children...

Purged is the fourth book in The Circle City Mystery Series. I have not read any of the rest so do not know how this particular book relates to earlier stories. When the individual who is doing the crime is immediately identified, there is little real mystery for me. Pitting one religion against another to result in violence is not my preference, but the author carried this sensitive issue well, adding little tidbits such as a mixed-religion marriage, to soften the overall effect. I hope I've given you sufficient info to help you decide. The author is award-winning so you can be assured that the book is well written.  Do check it out, at least, won't you?


GABixlerReviews

M. E. May (Michele) lives in the far Northwest Suburbs of Chicago, Illinois, with her husband, Paul, and white Husky, Iris. She was born in Indianapolis, Indiana, the fourth of five children to working class parents. Both of her parents were avid readers who loved mystery, fantasy and romance. They often encouraged her to read as well. Her son, Brian, and daughter, Marie, and four wonderful grandsons, Kodey, Kaleb, Kameron, and Gustin all live in central Indiana. M. E. attended Indiana University-Kokomo studying Social and Behavioral Sciences. This sparked her interest in the psychology of humans and the curiosity to ask why they commit such heinous crimes upon one another.

At age 50, she finally realized what she wanted to be when she grew up -- an author. She always knew she had it in her, but was never quite sure how to fit writing in with raising children and working full-time. In 2008, her wonderful husband found out about her dream of becoming an author. He suggested she take a year off to get started. The children were grown and have been on their own for several years now, so why not?

Michele is a member of several organizations, such as Mystery Writers of America (including the local chapter MWA Midwest); Sisters in Crime (Chicagoland and Speed City in Indianapolis) and is currently Vice President and Program Chair of the Chicagoland group; Chicago Writers of America and their affiliate InPrint.

She is currently writing a series of novels involving the Indianapolis Metropolitan Police Department, which she calls the Circle City Mystery Series. The first novel, Perfidy, explores the depths of human perception and to what lengths a person will go in seeking revenge. Perfidy was honored on February 2, 2013, by colleagues at the Love is Murder Conference in Chicago, when Michele received the 2013 Lovey Award for Best First Novel. The second novel, Inconspicuous, was nominated for the 2014 Lovey Award for Best Suspense. The third novel in the series, Ensconced, was released March 7, 2014, and the fourth, Purged, will be released on November 20, 2014. Michele was also privileged to have her short story, "Uncle Vito and the Cheerleader" accepted for the Speed City Sisters in Crime anthology, Hoosier Hoops and Hijinks, which was released in October 2013.

Saturday, November 1, 2014

Do you Remember??? A Tribute to Wonderful Sophie Tucker and her Career...

Last night I saw a woman,
who looks much like this star,
 sing a song called,
 "I Live Alone and Like It!
Ok, not only was it funny,
but I thought...maybe a new
 theme song for me at my age???

 What do you think?
~~~


A Tribute to a Woman

After my Own Heart...

  1. Sophie Tucker was a Ukrainian-born American singer, comedian, actress, and radio personality. Known for her stentorian delivery of comical and risqué songs, she was one of the most popular entertainers ... Wikipedia
  2. Born: January 13, 1887, Russia
  3. Died: February 9, 1966, New York City, NY

My sister, Dee, recently said that I'd never stopped working, even though I retired... Well, here's Sophie in 1960 appearing on Ed Sullivan, just six years before she died... So I still got a long way to go, right?

I've picked out songs that are funny because that's what she's best known for; however, she did have a beautiful voice as well... Ok, maybe my singing has been limited to churcy things, but that counts, for an amateur...

Sophia was apparently quite content at whatever age she was, and washn't concerned about sharing her thoughts on the matter...LOL



You know I've talked about reading so much and not getting much exercise, but Sophie spoke up the real truth... She sure is My Kinda Woman...

She's famous for her Red Hot Mama songs...


Welllll, we all can't be a star...LOL

You sure got That Right, Sophia...




One of These Days is one of my favorites of her songs...
What about you? Ya' Gonna Miss Me Honey?

Sure glad I heard that song last night...I enjoyed putting this together to share with all of you!
Glenda

What if... God's Plan for the United States Was Fulfilled as of 2015 - His Plan Where DEI was Flourishing For this Country?

Recently, I've been feeling like God has taken over my mind...Who knows? Because I had this draft created...with all the videos below......