"At that moment, Eve was lying naked on David’s bed, stoned nearly to unconsciousness. Beside her, David, equally naked and completely unconscious, snored and drooled. By the bed, the dishes from last night’s meal were covered with a black and heaving layer of ants, feasting on the congealed fat and scraps of food. Two tumblers were near the plates. One had tipped over and spilled the last of the whisky that had once filled it on the sheepskin rug. The other was half-filled with urine, having been as far as David had managed to stagger when he felt the need. Damp yellowish stains in the fur around it gave testimony of the unsteadiness of his hand when he tried to aim the flow. Their discarded clothes were scattered around the room along with those discarded on earlier occasions. The room stank of rotting food and unwashed clothes and bodies. They’d scarcely left it for a week.
"David had returned home to Lujeri Estate from his school in England ten days before. When he first arrived, his mother, who had collected him from Chileka airport west of Blantyre, had dropped him at the estate’s administrative office to greet his father. Eve, sitting at the reception desk had caught his eye immediately.
“Here,” he thought, “was just the tasty bit of liquorish to feed his appetite while he was on holiday. But first things first.” He told Eve to announce his arrival to his father and not waiting for any reply, he proceeded back to the manager’s office at the rear of the building, where he found his father father seated behind his enormous desk, initialing papers.
"Without looking up, his father greeted him, “Hello, David, have a good flight?”
“Yes, sir. No problems.”
“And a good term?”
“Yes, I aced all the end of year exams.”
“That’s good. I spend too much money sending you abroad to school to allow you to waste it in sloth and dissipation..."
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The Phantom Lover
By Norman Filler
He flicked his tongue over the button that was
there until she moaned and panted with
pleasure and spread her legs as wide as she
could and lifted them until her thighs were
pressed against her torso, and then he moved
inward, plunging his tongue into the silky
slippery dampness. Taking advantage of his
ability for shape change, he swelled his
tongue until he could penetrate and fill
more thoroughly than the most well-endowed
man could do with a different part of his
body, and so brought her to a screaming
climax, wave after wave of ecstasy convulsing
her whole being – mind and body, muscles
fluttering and every nerve-ending sparking
with explosive force - making her deaf and
blind to what was outside her by the
overwhelming power of what was going on
inside. Speechless for some time, as she
began to come down from the pinnacle,
she drew him up until she could gaze deep
into his yellow eyes
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Erotica may not be your thing, but you may enjoy this short story of African lore where a grandmother knows best what is good for her granddaughter.
Eve has fallen in with the son on a large estate during his break from school. He gets her involved in drugs, drinking, and, worse, has no intention of establishing a relationship with his father's receptionist! Duh... As for David, he thought he had the right "to sample the morsels..."
But when her grandmother goes to see Eve, she chases her away, in shame for the old woman...or for herself...?
Because Eve was a special woman...
As had been her mother, her grandmother, and her great-grandmother...
Eve had attended the white man's school and learned things that could prevent her from working on behalf of
Africa--her grandmother had to do something!
Norman Filler has taken a classic story of Africa and
added just a touch of the cultural issues between the
Blacks and Whites, then adds more than enough magic
created by Grandma to keep Eve and many others
happy...LOL
It provides a provocative question to
ponder about being able to keep your heritage within
the context of a different one. The writing is well done
and should be considered by all adults. The erotica does
not overpower the important story line being shared... but
that's just my opinion...
Now I only put one small erotic excerpt into this review, but I'll assure you that you will be satisfied...with the content... but I did decide to go over to Pinterest and see if I could find anybody that sounded like Ndauka... Okay, the one I found was a painting--but he seemed to fit the bill for a god-made man... What do you think... And just for a little fun, here's what I figured Eve looked like after meeting him...
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